Dog is confronted with the presence of a large, unpredictable and utterly malicious rubber ball. As the standoff ensues, Dog must choose to rise above his fears and end his enemy, or become the victim.
Hey, love your work, the detail shows you're really dedicated. Do you think there are any other aspects you could include? Like, what makes the rubber so intimidating? Did the dog have a previous bad experience with this ball? I'd like to see what other kinds of directions you could take this story, but it's a good start. Probably a good idea to let us know everything that is going on, as in directly telling us in the post if he does rise above his fears or not. I'm only saying this because of the professors mentioning that they didn't want the posts to keep us in the dark, so spoilers are welcome, remember it's just so we can grasp a good idea of your story right away and critique it so that your future work gains from it.
Hey, love your work, the detail shows you're really dedicated. Do you think there are any other aspects you could include? Like, what makes the rubber so intimidating? Did the dog have a previous bad experience with this ball? I'd like to see what other kinds of directions you could take this story, but it's a good start. Probably a good idea to let us know everything that is going on, as in directly telling us in the post if he does rise above his fears or not. I'm only saying this because of the professors mentioning that they didn't want the posts to keep us in the dark, so spoilers are welcome, remember it's just so we can grasp a good idea of your story right away and critique it so that your future work gains from it.
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